Like all others
there is
a strength from within
I refuse to lose
I refuse to die.
I adapt to turmoil
I adapt to peace
I refuse to be idle
I refuse not knowing.
Constant changes
but I remain the same
constant thinking
but I remain silent
I refuse to share.
I allow privileges
I deny access
I dont stand alone
I refuse to lose
I refuse to die.
Give me feedback on what you think. Thanks. Its for English1102 ;)
there is
a strength from within
I refuse to lose
I refuse to die.
I adapt to turmoil
I adapt to peace
I refuse to be idle
I refuse not knowing.
Constant changes
but I remain the same
constant thinking
but I remain silent
I refuse to share.
I allow privileges
I deny access
I dont stand alone
I refuse to lose
I refuse to die.
Give me feedback on what you think. Thanks. Its for English1102 ;)
great poem loved it
ReplyDelete=) thanks
ReplyDeletewow thats really good. do you write alot. post some more!
ReplyDeletereally good, i liked it!
ReplyDeletethanks all :) yeah thats completely about me, and missing some things too im sure
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, keep em coming
ReplyDeleteNice! Keep them coming.
ReplyDeletecool poem bro
ReplyDeleteReally good poem.. Thoroughly enjoyed it.. Makes me feel a little depressed though D:
ReplyDeletethats really good
ReplyDeleteHmm, not too bad, but starting off half the lines with I kind of dulls it a little.
ReplyDeletekeep up the awesome
ReplyDeleteI must admit
ReplyDeleteThat's pretty neat
Keep it up!
give me a wassup
and i'll be back!
>Hmm, not too bad, but starting off half the lines with I kind of dulls it a little.
ReplyDeleteNeeds some variety.
I honestly, don't know what to think.
ReplyDeleteno new post today whats up ?
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